I drew a heart in my notebook,
another on my hand,
sculpted one with play dough,
and drew on in the sand.
formed one with my hair tie,
traced one with my toes,
all the while just hoping,
that our relationship grows.
~is this poem incredibly cheesy??????~
Tuesday, November 18, 2008
Doodling Heart
Posted by shineliketinfoil at 4:49 AM
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Awe ! Yes, it is a little cheesy (haha), but love poems typically can't escape that mold. But that wasn't at all an inhibiting factor to your piece.
I think it's adorable and really shows the amount of reflection that love (or the desire there of) can induce by the repition of the image of a heart in everything that this person does.
I also liked the concept of hope and love being intertwined in the manner in which you presented it.
Very cute piece.
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